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Idk what direction to go in, it’s in early phases but what should I change or add, sorry for long and sloppy Irony has always had a sense of humor. That’s what everyone said about the man they called “Saint.” His real name was Victor Hale, but no one used it anymore–not the cops, not the newspapers, not the black market contacts who’d whispered his reputation through back alleys for twenty years. “Saint” came from a joke early on in his career. He never hurt anyone. Never carried a gun. He left homes cleaner than how he found them, sometimes even fixed hinges that squeaked or floorboards that creaked on his way out. One woman swore he watered her dying plants while she was out on vacation. Another claimed he’d left a thank-you note for her expensive taste in jewelry. “Saint,” they called him–because he was the nicest criminal anyone had ever been robbed by. Victor grew up in a house that was always one bill away from darkness. His mother cleaned up offices at night; his father disappeared before he could even remember his face. Victor and his mother He discovered the art of burglary at the early age of seventeen. A rich classmate kept bragging about him and his family leaving their luxurious home to the Maldives for a couple weeks. Victor knew where the kid lived and was fed up with the supercilious behavior and decided to swipe a watch from his “prized” collection that he displays to the class every time his daddy buys him a new one. Victor was an amateur at this time, fortunately for him the family had an outdated security system and the cameras didn’t work. Victor slipped in through a basement window and walked through rooms freely that looked like exhibits out of a museum. He took a watch, just one. Enough to pay his mothers bills. The thrill wasn’t the money–it was the quiet. The stillness of empty houses with the feeling of moving through other people’s lives unseen. Over the years, he refined his craft into an art. No violence. No confrontation. No weapons. He studied routines like a scientist studies sequences. He listened for dogs, alarm systems, even the hum of electricity behind walls. He moved like a shadow that paid attention to detail. Saint didn’t wake up wanting to be a criminal–he just realized the world rewarded his illegal skill more than his legal one. His mother was the root of his patience with her having no sitter for him as a child he was forced to come along with her as she cleaned the floors of an office building. Hours upon hours of sitting spinning in the office chairs for hours waiting for his mother to finish her shift. This gave him plenty of practice with mental exercises and patience. Victor tried doing odd jobs or the typical fast food teenage experience but the legitimate work felt slow, underpaid and closed off to him. With the burglary skills he faintly possessed at this time he had already received double what he made bouncing from job to job in his teenage years. Deep down he knows it's wrong. He just refuses to call himself a bad person. He told himself he wasn’t a monster, rather he was but a ghost who “borrowed” things. The House on Alder Ridge was supposed to be easy. Owners out of town. The security system was outdated. A wealthy tech executive rumored to keep expensive watches and rare coins. Victor watched the place for weeks—lights off at night, mail piling up, no unexpected visitors. With the experience Saint had this should’ve been a no-brainer—a quick in and out robbery. He approached the home on the south side exterior wall and propped open a window that was left unlocked, “I might not even have to bring my burglary tool kit anymore at this rate,” he thought. His last 4 scores all had unlocked windows for a quick and easy entry and exit. His usual tool kit sat neatly in his black duffel bag that rested across his back, fitted with the essentials: Lockpick, glass cutter, wire cutters, snake cameras, flashlight, rope/climbing gear etc. The point was he was more than prepared every time. He slipped in through the window at 2:13 a.m. The house smelled wrong. Not empty, but metallic—stale. He ignored it at first, and focused on his job. Safe in the office, a few drawers in the bedroom, and best of all and nice big jewelry box set on the dresser. After picking apart the jewels he sought, that’s when he turned to enter the kitchen. The smell hit almost faster than the sight. A man slumped near the kitchen island, eyes open, skin gray. Blood dried in a black halo on the marble flooring. Victor froze. Every instinct screamed leave. He slowly backed toward the door, mind racing through scenarios—call police anonymously? Run? Clean up evidence? Absolutely not. This was one mess he couldn’t just clean up and move on with. Finally he made up his mind to put the jewelry back and exit the way he came, just as he had turned to leave, red and blue lights flashed across the walls. Someone had called them ahead of his arrival. Before he could even think of bolting out the window, the front door burst open. Officers pointed their guns at Victor and shouted commands. He raised his hands immediately, palms up, trying to speak. “I just got here,” he said. “I’m a burglar okay? I did break in but I didn’t—“ They slammed him to the ground before he could even finish. Definitely not his proudest performance of quick wits. Chapter 2 maybe The interrogation room smelled like burnt coffee and old carpet. Victor sat in the uncomfortably cold metal chair whilst handcuffed to the table. The detectives in front of him glared at him with a cold glare as they slid photos across the table: the dead homeowner, the open window with dirt tracked inside, and multiple blood smears. “You should probably get to some explainin’ bud, you’re in quite the mess here. Care to tell me what you were doing in the house?” The detective spat out after giving him not even a second to go over the photos. There were two detectives sitting in front of Victor, the one on the right much older with salt and pepper hair and a thick mustache. The other sat politely next to him, much much younger, looked to be about mid twenties. Wore a tight blonde ponytail and sharp red glasses that sat on her sharp cheekbones. “Alright well I was robbing the place,” Victor admitted, “But that’s it, I had entered not even 5 minutes before your guys showed up.” His honesty didn’t help. The detectives looked at each other and burst out laughing. The evidence stacked against him, even though he was technically innocent in the case they brought against him. They had pulled surveillance of him scouting the house weeks before. The jewels and tools filled his bag to the brim, with a history of burglaries the police were eager to close, it was easy to pin it all on him. And then came the twist: the homeowner was a controversial investor with enemies—and a suspicious insurance policy. Prosecutors painted Victor as a meticulous planner who’d studied the victim’s routine, entered in silently, and killed without witnesses. “You’re known for never being caught,” the detective said. “They legend himself, that makes you careful—which makes you dangerous.” Victor laughed at first, sure he’d be tried for the burglaries but that was no problem, he’d known this job had come with its risks and although he never expected to be caught, in the end he wasn’t that surprised. At this moment he thought it would eventually be proven a misunderstanding that would resolve itself within days once forensic evidence cleared him. But the days turned into weeks. The murder charge stuck. The country jail intake was fluorescent hell. He stood in line wearing clothes stiff with sweat and disbelief. One by one they took everything—watch, belt, shoelaces, even the small ring he’d revived from his late mother that he’d never taken off. A guard snapped a plastic bracelet around his wrist like he was tagging livestock. “Face forward.” Mugshot flash. Fingerprints pressed into ink. Questions fired without eye contact: medical history, gang affiliation, next of kin. Victor kept asking the same thing. “When does this get cleared up? When do I talk to someone who can fix this? Shouldn’t I have spoken to a lawyer by now? The intake officer didn’t look up. “Everyone says they’re innocent.” They handed him an orange uniform that smelled like detergent and fear. He changed in a room full of strangers pretending not to watch each other’s vulnerability. Cold showers. Thin mattresses. Metal doors that slammed with finality. A guard read his charges aloud during classification. “Burglary. Breaking and entering. First-degree murder.” The words hit harder than the cuffs ever had. “I didn’t kill anyone,” Victor said. The guard shrugged. “Tell it to the judge, Saint.” The nickname followed him inside, twisted into something cruel. Jail wasn’t the chaos he expected—it was worse. Monotony. The slow grind of time measured by meal trays and headcounts. Conversations whispered through bars. People trading stories like currency. Some inmates admired his reputation. Others eyed him with suspicion—burglars were one thing, but alleged killers were something else entirely. He replayed the night over and over in his head. The smell of blood. The timing of the police arrival. Who had called them? Why was he the only suspect? It had to have been a set up. His public defender visited twice in three weeks. Overworked. Honest in a way that made Victor uneasy. “The prosecution thinks you’re perfect for this,” she began. “A career criminal already in the house. Jury will struggle to sympathize.” “But there’s no evidence I killed him,” Victor insisted. “No direct evidence,” she corrected. “But circumstances pile up fast.” The courtroom felt smaller than he imagined, like a stage built for someone else’s tragedy. Prosecutors described him as a phantom predator who escalated from theft to murder. They used his nickname against him—“Saint,” they said, mocking the idea of a harmless burglar. They showed surveillance footage. Photos of tools. A timeline that fit too neatly around his presence. His lawyer argued lack of motive, absence of forensic proof tying him to the killing. She emphasized his nonviolent history, the decades without assault or weapon charges.But the jury saw a man in a stolen home standing near a corpse. When the verdict came back—guilty—Victor felt something inside him go quiet. The judge’s voice echoed like distant thunder. “For years you invaded the sanctity of people’s homes. Tonight, the court holds you accountable not only for theft but for the irreversible loss of life.” Victor wanted to scream. He knew that anybody who actually knew him would know that he wouldn’t hurt a fly. He wanted to stand up and shout that burglary wasn’t murder, that he’d never even raised a hand against anyone. Instead he felt numb, as if he were watching someone else’s life unravel. The sentence was long enough to feel like forever. As guards led him away, he turned back toward the courtroom, hoping someone—anyone—would realize the mistake. No one did. Inside the system Prison processing was colder than jail. Shaved head. New number. New rules. The clang of gates that made county lockup feel like a waiting room. A counselor read through his file. “Career burglar,” she said. “Now convicted murderer.” Victor laughed bitterly. “I was better at stealing watches than killing people.” She didn’t respond. Files didn’t care about nuance. He learned quickly that innocence meant little inside. Reputation mattered more. Survival required quiet observation—the same skills that once made him an expert cat burglar. He watched people. Learned schedules. Mapped routines. Old habits die hard. His first few nights in his cell were restless, he replayed every detail of that night, searching for answers that never came. Who really killed the homeowner? Why were the police already on the way to the scene? Why had the system ultimately failed to correctly sentence him? Sometimes he wondered if irony had always been chasing him—the man called Saint finally punished for a crime he truly didn’t commit. In his cell, he kept a small notebook. Not plans for escape. Not lists of stolen goods. Just questions. Because for the first time in his life, Victor Hale wasn’t a ghost slipping through other people’s lives unnoticed. He was a man trapped inside someone else’s story—waiting for a truth no one seemed interested in finding. And every night, as the lights dimmed and the prison hummed with restless sleep, Saint stared at the ceiling and whispered the same sentence to the darkness: “I only broke in to steal.” Chapter 3 prolly When Victor Hale—Saint to everyone who’d ever chased or feared him—finally arrived at Ironwood State Prison, the gates didn’t feel dramatic. They felt… ordinary. That was worse. No thunder, no cinematic weight. Just a dull mechanical buzz and a gate sliding open like a bored mouth swallowing him whole. A correctional officer handed him a folded uniform and a thin mattress. “Welcome home, Saint,” the man said without looking up. The nickname had outrun him. Victor didn’t know why he needed to be moved to a second prison but honestly he gave up asking questions a while ago. The intake wing smelled like bleach and cold concrete. Men moved in slow lines, eyes forward, everyone pretending they weren’t studying everyone else. Victor felt the old instincts flicker—mapping exits, counting guards, noticing who stood tall and who hunched like prey. But there was no slipping out of this place. He was assigned to Cellblock C, second tier. The doors slammed with a rhythm that sounded almost alive. His cellmate was already there. Marcus “Red” Delgado was a mountain of muscle with rust-colored hair and tattoos crawling up his neck like vines. He sat on the lower bunk reading a paperback crime novel. Red looked up and smirked. “Saint,” he said casually. “Didn’t think I’d ever share a room with a legend.” Victor halted. “You got the wrong guy.” Red laughed. “Nah. I used to run security systems for rich people before I got busted. Heard stories. The burglar who never hurt anyone. People said you’d break into a house and leave it better than you found it.” Victor set his mattress down slowly. “Stories get exaggerated.” Red’s expression shifted, more serious now. “So you really kill that guy?” “No,” Victor said. The word came out heavier than he expected. “I don’t hurt people.” Red studied him for a long moment, weighing something invisible. “Good,” he finally said. “Because killers get treated differently. And if you’re not one… you better be careful who thinks you are.” With word spreading around the prison like wildfire, fresh meat Saint felt trapped between two identities: the burglar he’d been, and the murderer most believed him to be. Prison ran on routine. Wake-up bells. Headcounts. Work assignments. Meals that tasted like cardboard dipped in salt. Victor got assigned to maintenance—fixing squeaky doors, repairing broken lockers. The irony wasn’t lost on him. For years he’d slipped through broken systems; now he was patching them up. The work gave him purpose. And space to listen. He heard whispers about Ironwood—about corrupt guards, rival cliques, rumors that some inmates worked as informants. He watched everything the way he used to case houses: quietly, patiently. Red became a steady presence. Not a friend exactly, but an anchor. They talked at night about old jobs, bad decisions, and the strange logic of prison politics. “You’re too calm,” Red said one evening. “I’ve spent my life waiting in quiet rooms,” Victor replied. “Stillness doesn’t scare me.” Red shook his head. “This place ain’t a house you can sneak out of.” Victor didn’t answer. He knew that better than anyone. The Lawyer Visit Three weeks into his sentence, Victor got called to legal visitation. About time, he thought. The room was divided by scratched plexiglass that smelled like disinfectant and old breath. His lawyer, Dana Whitaker, looked exhausted—dark circles under her eyes, files spilling out of a worn leather bag. She picked up the phone. “How are you holding up?” Victor gave a humorless laugh. “I’ve had better hotel stays.” Her smile was brief. Then she grew serious. “I’ve been reviewing the case again. There are inconsistencies.” His chest tightened. “What do ya got?” She flipped through notes. “Time of death estimates are shaky. And there was an anonymous 911 call placed before police arrived. We never identified the caller.” Victor leaned forward. “So someone else was there.” “Possibly,” she said carefully. “But appeals aren’t magic. They’re slow. And we need something concrete.” He felt anger surge up like heat under his skin. “They gave me life because I was convenient. Because I was already a criminal.” Dana didn’t argue. “Juries don’t like burglars found standing next to corpses.” “I told the truth,” he said quietly. “I thought that would matter.” She met his eyes through the scratched plastic. “Truth matters eventually. But the system moves like molasses. We need patience and evidence.” He swallowed hard. “How long?” She hesitated. That was enough to answer. “Years?” he gulped. “Maybe,” she admitted. “But I’m not giving up.” The words should’ve comforted him. Instead they felt fragile, like paper shields against a storm. Before the guard signaled time, Victor leaned closer. “Find whoever made that call,” he said. “That’s the key. Someone wanted me there.” Dana nodded slowly. “I think you’re right.” Back in Cell C-214, Victor lay on the top bunk staring at the ceiling. The prison hummed with distant shouts, clanging doors, restless footsteps. Red looked up from his book. “Lawyer got good news?” “Maybe,” Victor responded. “Or maybe just hope.” Red grunted. “Hope’s dangerous in here.” Victor turned toward the wall. “So is giving up.” In the dark, he listened to the rhythms of Ironwood the way he used to listen to houses—pipes rattling, footsteps echoing, whispers traveling through vents. He wasn’t planning an escape. Not yet at least. But his mind cataloged everything out of habit. Because Saint was still a burglar at heart—an observer of patterns, a student of systems. And somewhere beyond those walls, someone knew the truth about the night on Alder Ridge. Inside Ironwood, surrounded by strangers who saw him as a killer or a legend or both, Victor Hale felt the same confusion that had followed him since the verdict. But now, mixed in with it, was something new. A quiet determination. Because if the world insisted on turning a ghost into a monster, he would have to learn how to live long enough to prove he was neither. Ironwood had settled into Victor Hale’s bones like the winter. Weeks turned into months. The rhythms that once felt alien—headcounts, chow lines, clanging steel doors—became background noise. He stopped waking in panic at every shout. Stopped expecting someone to burst into his cell and announce a mistake had been corrected. Instead, he learned the prison the same way he’d learned mansions and penthouses: quietly, obsessively, patiently. Saint was studying the system. It didn’t take long for old ghosts to appear. One afternoon in the yard, while Victor repaired a busted metal bench, a voice called out from behind him. “Well I’ll be damned. The Saint finally fell.” Victor turned. Calvin “Wire” Mercer leaned against the fence, thinner than Victor remembered but still wearing the same crooked grin. Years ago, Wire had been a fence—a middleman who sold stolen goods to collectors who preferred not to ask questions. They’d worked together on dozens of jobs. “I thought you’d retired,” Wire said, eyes glinting. “Heard rumors you went legit.” Victor shook his head. “Never got around to it.” They shook hands as they approached each other. Wire nodded toward a group watching from across the yard. “You got admirers. And enemies. Some think you’re a killer now. Others think you’re a myth who finally got sloppy.” Victor met his gaze. “I didn’t kill anyone.” Wire studied him for a long moment, then nodded slowly. “I believe you. You were always… precise. Too controlled to make that kind of mess.” Wire had always been rational and Intelligent; which is why Saint had chosen to stay in contact with him throughout his burglary spree. “I wish people in higher positions had your type of thinking,” Victor admitted. Wire became a cautious ally—passing along whispers about prison politics, warning Victor about inmates who might test him, reminding people that Saint had a reputation for restraint, not brutality. Dana Whitaker became a fixture in Victor’s weeks. At first she was still technically his public defender—overworked, juggling dozens of cases—but she kept coming back to his file. Something about it bothered her. The anonymous 911 call. The shaky time-of-death estimates. The lack of physical evidence. Then one afternoon she arrived at visitation with a different energy. “I’ve made a decision,” she said through the glass. “I’m leaving the public defender’s office. Going private.” Victor blinked. “Congratulations… I think?” She smiled faintly. “My first client is you. If you want me.” He hesitated. “I don’t have money.” “I know,” she said. “I’m taking this pro bono—for now. Your case doesn’t sit right with me. And honestly… I need to see it through.” The words landed heavier than any sentence the judge had given him. “I don’t even know what to say, I really appreciate this Dana, I hope that we can help each other" Victor said eventually. “Although you’ve made many many questionable decisions and choices in your lifestyle, I can’t help but see the good in you. Real Robinhood vibes, you have a good heart and I want the world to see the real you, even if that is just a majorly reduced sentence,” She responded. From that day on, Dana wasn’t just another lawyer cycling through appointments. She was his advocate. His investigator. His one consistent link to the outside world. Their visits became routine—once a week, sometimes more. Dana brought updates slowly, cautiously. “The anonymous call came from a prepaid phone,” she said during one visit. “But I found something interesting. A neighbor reported seeing a second person near the house earlier that night—someone who didn’t match your description.” Victor leaned forward. “Why wasn’t that in court?” “It was,” she said. “But buried. The prosecution framed it as an unrelated passerby.” She also discovered financial irregularities connected to the dead homeowner—investments tied to criminal networks, possible enemies with real motives. Each new detail felt like oxygen after months underwater. But appeals were slow. Painfully slow. “Best case,” Dana said one afternoon, “we file for a new evidentiary hearing within a year.” Victor nodded, though the timeline felt endless. After these visits he reluctantly returned to his cell, often resuming a conversation with his cell mate, Red. As time went on Red became more than just his cell mate; he had slowly shaped into a decent guy that Saint had started to consider him as a good friend. They balanced each other in subtle ways, where Victor was quiet and analytical, Red was direct and physical. Red taught him the unspoken rules of prison—how to refuse favors without starting fights, how to read the body language of potential threats. In return, Victor helped Red write letters to his daughter, crafting words that sounded strong but vulnerable. One night Red asked, “You ever get angry? Like… really angry about all this?” Victor thought for a long time before answering. “I get focused,” he said. “Anger makes you sloppy. Sloppy gets you caught.” Red laughed. “You sound like a monk.” “Or a burglar,” Victor replied. They developed rituals—playing chess with a handmade board, trading stories about their pasts, sitting in silence when words felt too heavy. Trust grew greater and stronger over time

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